Though it reminds me of DDR, it still original in it's own way!

Sounds like a recording if a classic rock song, tbh. Like you recorded it in your car on a kong drive.

Drop feels underwhelming. The fast hats don't go with the slow bass. It's almost like you decided to have the drums run at 180 bpm, and the bass at only around 90 to 100 bpm.
Though, I do like the sound of the bass. However, the two pre-drops sound similar, and the bass at the end feels weak.

pretty good for a first song, however it starts off a bit too energetic. You could have had a pre-drop...